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Bondage Breakup
Author: Voyeur21
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(Added on Jul 21, 2012)
(This month 23104 readers) (Total 37478 readers) |
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A couple break up after an intense BDSM relationship. She asks him for some of their toys and restraints- the sadistic dom agrees on the condition that she can only take those sex toys and outfits that she can manage to wear, fit or strap onto herself in one go for her last bondage and orgasm filled trip home! A tale of 3 parts. |
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| Reviewer:
graymangazer
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Aug 5, 2012 |
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good start and well written, although there wasnt a lot of action there`s a promise of things to come. I`m looking forward to the next part. (9/10)
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Curtis
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Jul 30, 2012 |
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A good start, but in spite of its 12k, not really enough to post. You did set the scene well, and there's a taster of what's to come.
Aside from length, my only two complaints are exclusively about format. My old eyes would appreciate a larger font, though this one is readable with effort. Why does the number of empty lines separating your paragraphs vary? It seems to range between one and three, which I find distracting. One is good. (8/10)
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