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Cristal Fantasy
Author: Dave
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(Added on May 21, 2002)
(This month 51215 readers) (Total 62030 readers) |
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A grumpy old guy awakens a young girls fantasy. A less violent then normal composition centering on castration. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Req_Pro
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May 22, 2002 |
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hastelly rendered but original story line. The only thing displeasing about this work is that you could tell the author was masturbating while writing, and if so...they wrote the end while washing up. Good story, poor ending thats why I gave it a six. (6/10)
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