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The Mansion
Author: Mad Dog
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(Added on Sep 10, 2000)
(This month 330524 readers) (Total 426816 readers) |
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Master built the mansion where males had the total control and the only the females needed to do was obey their master's every order. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 3, 2009 |
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Liked the concept, didn't like the writing. Short, staccato sentences, with no real plot whatsoever.
Settings where great, on the other hand, as is the inventiveness of some tortures.
But after having gone through the lot, I can't feel but slightly disappointed.
I still would encourage you to continue writing though, unlike some rather arrogant folk below.
JJ (7/10)
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Jemmasub
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Sep 30, 2005 |
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Love it to bits! Couldnt read it all in one go, couldn't even read a whole chapter in one go without interuptions (blush). Please write more Sir.
Jemma. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 12, 2004 |
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The Master and The Bitch... This story needs a little more than just this to get off the field with. (5/10)
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nickmeister
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Feb 14, 2003 |
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real strict and strong
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Dec 3, 2002 |
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This is a really good story. Even if I would never agree to the ideas portrayed in real life, in a story, it's fucking cool. I like the way it develops, though I think that the Master should have given the women some incentive to please him, for example the amazon ... she should have been rewarded for her loyalty. Also, shouldn't pedophilia be added to the codes? There were a few spelling errors, but the awesomeness of the story makes up for them. Truly a great work. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
VLMarquette
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Mar 14, 2002 |
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I already reviewed this horrid thing, just forgot to rate it.
Ronnie (1/10)
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Nel |
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Nov 24, 2000 |
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Excellent story for those who like strick nc torture (10/10)
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A.M |
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Sep 20, 2000 |
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Great (9/10)
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L. M. |
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Sep 13, 2000 |
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This is a good story. I liked that he had a spice of life in there. As hyphen said "...equal opportunity pervert...", it is very true and to the point. I liked it mcuh. (9/10)
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D.J. |
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Sep 12, 2000 |
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Pretty good story. Keep writing. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
ABrunetteWoman |
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Sep 12, 2000 |
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Not much of a plot and not much depth to the characters. The author didn't seem to bother too much about spelling and punctuation etc either,
but not bad for a first attempt. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
VLMarquette
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2002)
- I happen to agree with you, no plot, other than to destroy women. I've been writing for this site for some time, have 6 whole books and 2 partials under my belt, so I do know something of what a plot is. This clown is playing out a sick fantasy, he does not like women, and so he wants to see them all grovel. Pretty pathetic, if you ask me.
V.L. Marquette
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VLMarquette
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2002)
- I am not sure if I sent the first one, so if I didn't here it is. You make only the second writer on this site that I have ever seen that was quite as sick and twisted. What, your mother not love you growing up or something? Or did your girlfriend, or wife, leave you? It's real obvious that you do not like women. And I am not just talking out of ignorance. I have been working with this site for over a year, and have published 6 whole books and 2 partial ones since Nov last year. So trust me, I know what B&D, and S&M are and how to write about it. I have been a full time sub for the last 13 years. And you know what we call folks like you? Wannabe's. Please, don't write any more. Spare us all your twisted idea of amusement.
V. L. Marquette
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JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 3, 2009)
- Your sneers and belittlement are completely uncalled for, VL.
Ypu may have a couple of published books under your belt, that still doesn't mean you know Jack Shit about plots. It could mean that your publisher is a complete retard.
And as far as your generous and democtratic insights go, it says a lot about your character when you're the one wanting to decide who's to write and who doesn't.
Go write another book, even post it here on The Library, but please, leave yer little Nazi-streak at the door. Cuz before you know it, we're burning books again.
JJ
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| Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Sep 11, 2000 |
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Let me be the first to recognize a major new talent in the field of BDSM. This story is brilliant! It has a tremendous cast of victims which allows the author's fertile imagination to run rampant. The author is also an equal opportunity pervert, sparing no race in his frenzied attempt to eliminate or subject the entire female population of the world to his twisted will. Mad Dog, who ever you are, I salute you. Please start writing your next epic immediately. (10/10)
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