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Hannah Author: A.Broadsword
(Added on Apr 28, 2012) (This month 13094 readers) (Total 20239 readers)
Hannah gets to experience Pinkerton's mighty prong

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Reviewer: Michael247 (Edit) Rating: May 3, 2012
I laughed my way through this!
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Okay, in terms of erotica, "Hannah" by A.Broadsword wasn't exactly the most intriguing story. The sex scenes are sparse, quick, and more icing than cake. But there is an overall hilarity to the plot that just makes this story a pleasant read.
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First of all, the dialog of this piece will have you chuckling if not in stitches. It is a pastiche, a parody, with a little fun sex thrown in. The author does a fantastic job with the back and forth jibes, the inappropriate responses, and the faux outrages, all while the various characters express a shallow complexity that makes each and every one of them even more funny. Seriously, if you aren't laughing at the end of this, something is wrong with you.
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There isn't much that I can point to for improvement. Adding additional descriptions would have destroyed the flow of the piece. More character depth would have changed the feeling of parody. Perhaps I would have added more "fascination" at Pinkerton's carnal abilities while demonstrating his length for the first time on Hannah, but that's just my preference for more sex.
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All in all, this was a fantastic, fun little read.
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Yours Faithfully, Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (9/10)

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