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The first 24 hours.
Author: Leif
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(Added on Mar 17, 2012)
(This month 10843 readers) (Total 18323 readers) |
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She asked me to describe the first 24 hours.... |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 18, 2012 |
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Writing down a shortlist -and a rather awkward one to boot- of one's fantasies doesn't make a story. Far from.
On top, this short shortlist lacks inspiration and coherence and other than feeble thoughts from a feverish mind about a vague non-descript woman, there's nothing there which is supposedly going to make a woman fall for this drivel.
Pushing a woman in at the deep end when there's no water in the pool might prove not such a good idea if you want the woman to come running back at you all smiles.
JJ (2/10)
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