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Weighed
Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
Rating:  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
NaughtyPixie
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 4, 2012 |
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Very poorly written, this is a fine first draft but needs fleshing out. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
grinner666
(Edit) |
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Mar 13, 2012 |
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Story reads like the "Dick and Jane" books four-year-olds learn to read with. "See Dick Run. See Jane Run. See Spot run. See Spot dick Jane." There is no character development, no plot, and frankly, very little story. And one final thing: more exclamation points do NOT make for a more exciting story. (4/10)
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