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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (5.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
_ID_
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 17, 2012 |
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Flow and character build up was lacking (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
jonsmithie22
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 13, 2012 |
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I enjoyed the story! Nice hot little afternoon with Amy. I wish you would pay a little more attention to mechanics, you know, spelling, grammar, and the like. I enjoyed it because I believed this really could happen (or did happen). I'd like to read what other things you and Amy got up to, especially what else you did to Amy (and it's okay to make stuff up). (7/10)
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