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Revenge
Author: Loraspa6
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(Added on Feb 5, 2012)
(This month 87333 readers) (Total 102894 readers) |
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In an alternative Female Dominated timeline, A Female struggles to keep her male property and raise a family with him. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
onewhoadores
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Sep 10, 2012 |
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A beautiful, beautiful story. I loved it. This is what loving D/s erotic literature is and should be like. Thank you Loaspa6 (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Feb 15, 2012 |
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I think this story deserves top marks for being more intelligent and more realistic than most of this genre. Generally stories featuring female or male world domination have the dominant sex being brutal to the subjacted sex and for once we see another side to life.
This story clearly shows that there are men haters, as there are now in real life (yes I know there are also women haters as well), but some slave owners really do love their slave(s). This fact is also true to life as during the terrible period of slavery of negro's there were a few owners who did care for their slaves and did treat them as human beings, ok so it was very few but they did exist. The fact that in the story there are laws ensuring that slaves are not mistreated also makes sense, look at all the laws covering the protection of animals and a lot of those go back into the 1800's.
So well done Loraspa6 for writing an interesting and well thought out story. (10/10)
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svhh
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Feb 11, 2012 |
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Good narration, and nice situations. little reflection from the previous story. verdict : Excellent work (9/10)
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