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Maid
Author: Jill Smith
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(Added on Dec 11, 2011)
(This month 70946 readers) (Total 99740 readers) |
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Woman blackmails her maid and dominates her. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 18, 2012 |
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Was a descent story but could have been much better. (6/10)
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steevejo
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Dec 22, 2011 |
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veryyyyyyy hot please keep going (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
lacedark
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Dec 21, 2011 |
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This story made my little heart pound so loud i could hear it. It's definitely a contender for best new story, 2011.
Many stories use blackmail as leverage against the protagonist, but few abandon it as gleefully as Jill does. The story is clearly Jill's fantasy, but it's as though she seems aware of it and rather than giving into a stroker's pace, she piles on the humiliation - the incredibly creative and visceral humiliation! i love the things Marianne has the hero do and i will feel privileged if Jill Smith continues the story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 14, 2011 |
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Although I find "Maid" to be lacking in depth, I still grant this a fat niner because of the great character build and the very well done conversations annex inner musings; because the latter make good for my feelings of the aformentioned lack.
If Jill Smith keeps up this standard in her conversations/musings, then "Maid" might very well become one of those stories which stand out thanks to the skill in telling the tale through thoughts and dialogue... in fact, "Maid" already stands out because of this, but like I said, let's see if Jill keeps up the standard.
Very well done.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ksst
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Dec 14, 2011 |
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Very good story! I really enjoyed it. (10/10)
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