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The Surprise Party
Author: slave_paul
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(Added on Aug 14, 2011)
(This month 102099 readers) (Total 125503 readers) |
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A FemDom Mistress throws her submissive male husband a surprise birthday party where she and her Domme friend plan to enact several of his deep dark BDSM fantasies in a mixed group setting. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Sep 10, 2011 |
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Great story. Very well written, good flow to the events and a nice balance of action and character thoughts and feelings. This fella is a lucky guy, I'm sure a lot of men wish they were in his place!
One or two very minor formatting errors - odd line breaks, missing spaces and such. I only really mention this because it's about the only thing to critique! (10/10)
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Needhelp69
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Aug 27, 2011 |
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What a great idea. Any way we can sign up for similar torment.. Good job. Any other stories to follow (9/10)
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JerryH
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Aug 20, 2011 |
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Great story. Very imaginative and dirty. Please keep writing these. (9/10)
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just4you11
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Aug 15, 2011 |
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Well done! Where do I sign up for my birthday. Unfortunately for me I am a.couple of years more than 40.
Any other stories expected? (9/10)
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