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Mary and Carl
Author: FourPlay
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(Added on Mar 16, 2011)
(This month 78636 readers) (Total 87916 readers) |
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A wife finds out that her husband has cheated with others and takes total control of his life. The tale develops slowly enough to make a very implausable plot seem real. I feel it is one of my better stories and am eager to get feedback from my readers. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rocket71
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Mar 24, 2011 |
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FourPlay storys are always entertaining, and this one is no different. Thanks for sharing with us FourPlay. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sallyannslut
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Mar 20, 2011 |
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excellent story. please continue your writing. (9/10)
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