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Helen's Ordeal
Author: Hooked6
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(Added on Mar 16, 2011)
(This month 35524 readers) (Total 43296 readers) |
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At 16, Helen believes she is too old for corporal punishment, something she hasn't experienced since she was a child, but her mother has other ideas and enlists her brother and Helen's best friend, alice, to lend a hand. Things tend to spiral out of control as her pubishments become very public and very humiliating. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
violetgem
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Jul 25, 2012 |
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very hot. I hope there is more one day (9/10)
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Okan5
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Nov 5, 2011 |
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Excellent read. Very well played out. Details were impecable, drawing the reader right into the scenes. The diverse themes were integrated perfectly while being consistent with the overall plot. Keep up the great work. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
CarolinaSpanker
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Mar 28, 2011 |
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Well Done and a great read so far. Since Alice ia diabolical sh could spank her w ith a wooden paddle and for a humiliating finale make the girl put her face between her asscheeks and FART in her face. LOL (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Mar 25, 2011 |
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I felt like awarding this story a '9', just to counteract the '5' from Dusty Spring, but in the end decided to be honest. The story is hot, and not repetitive enough to bother me. The author manages to keep it fresh, at least through chapter six. I'm looking forward to the continuation. (8/10)
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rocket71
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Mar 24, 2011 |
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Good story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
doctavian
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Mar 23, 2011 |
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Helen's ordeal is an excellent story. It examines the Electra complex, (mother daughter sexual competitiveness) sibling incest, the humiliation of forced exposure and forced sexual submission. Then it cleverly introduces the discovery, by our post-adolescent protagonist, of the sexual eroticism of submission for young girls.And hints at the "empowerment" of our girls budding sexuality. (Remember "The submissive is the one that is typically the partner in charge of sexual relationships," Jung) It's well written and a fun read. Well done, Well done indeed,
Doctavian (9/10)
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Dusty Spring
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Mar 19, 2011 |
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Repetitive and shallow. After that much intro I'd have been well into the story line. (5/10)
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