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Diana\'s Puppy Love
Author: Golffdude
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(Added on Nov 9, 2010)
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Lost Virginity and the family pet |
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| Reviewer:
obelix1664
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Oct 5, 2011 |
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a little short but great storie.
Send us more of the adventure of Diana and his lover. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Golffdude45-2
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2011)
- Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I have written several longer stories on the subject. Would you be interested in helping develope a longer story?
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| Reviewer:
feral n free
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Apr 9, 2011 |
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I enjoyed the content very much, I coud imagine this happening (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Golffdude45-2
(Edit) (Apr 9, 2011)
- Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I am glad you enjoyed the work. :)
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pttwyn
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Nov 26, 2010 |
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I like bestiality stories, write them myself. This is off to a good start, but like jimmy said too little detail. You could re-write this and add more detail and re-post it. I like the whole concept. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Golffdude45-2
(Edit) (Apr 9, 2011)
- Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I intended this as a very short story relating no more than a single event in a friends life. Again thank you for your time.
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JimmyJump
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Nov 13, 2010 |
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Too rushed, too shallow and too short. Golffdude seems to have been in a serious hurry, or he posted the synopsys instead of his story...
Could (and should) be worked-out into something more elaborate, as the ingredients for some decent entertainment are obviously present.
JJ (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Golffdude45-2
(Edit) (Apr 9, 2011)
- This was intended to be no more than one single short event in a girls youth. I did not wish to make a longer story out of a walk thru the woods.
Where do you post the stories you write?
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