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Arrival
Author: Heather2
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(Added on Apr 4, 2002)
(This month 50433 readers) (Total 62229 readers) |
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An arrogant sub gets her first lesson in true submission. |
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 19, 2003 |
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I didn't think this was anything special but it was OK and mildly entertaining. No particular characterization, little innovation, poor grammar, very long paragraphs. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Jun 20, 2002 |
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Slow start, picks up nicely. (7/10)
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