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the time has come
Author: shona wood
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(Added on Apr 22, 2010)
(This month 48946 readers) (Total 53551 readers) |
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the meeting of a girls first time described on things that will happen |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Apr 25, 2010 |
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A bit 'better' than "Naughty Secretary", but only just.
Not because the story is 'bad', but because of the poor syntax/spelling and everything that goes with writing in English.
I feel that, should Shona Wood work on her English, appreciation would be way higher, because there's a decent writer inside her.
JJ (5/10)
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- Replied by:
shony
(Edit) (Apr 26, 2010)
- thank you so kindy for my review i liked it very much big smiles < :D
mi glad you enjoyed it im having the nexts ones proof read first due to my desliexoa so yours coments realy helped.
hope you enjoy them x
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