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Two Leashes
Author: James P
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(Added on Jan 3, 2010)
(This month 39419 readers) (Total 63747 readers) |
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A 35 year old man meets a lovely, quirky younger woman, who turns out to be a fabulous femdom. The younger woman converts him into her dog and brings her brash younger sister in to enhance his humiliation. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Mar 6, 2010 |
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Thanks for posting the complete story as chapter 2. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chuck
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Mar 1, 2010 |
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Great fun story! Well written and good attention to character development. I like the ample description of the situation and games. The scenes reflected the vivid imagination and ingenuity of the author. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
James P
(Edit) (Mar 1, 2010)
- Thanks very much. It's reviews like that and the one below that make me want to keep writing...
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| Reviewer:
Vincent Young
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Jan 12, 2010 |
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Love it. Great dialogue. Writer is always funny and knows his stuff. Pushes all the right buttons. Love this book! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Jan 4, 2010 |
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Over hyped mis-leadingly coded and not particularly good.
Very over simplistic, child like even. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
James P
(Edit) (Jan 5, 2010)
- Thanks for the feedback. It's true that the coding may have been a tad misleading, though that was not my intention. The coding reflects the entire novel. However, I'll post at least one additional update in the future. I don't really see how it's overly simplistic -- in fact, I think you missed the subtleties of the dialogue. In any case, it's not for everyone. Thanks again.
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