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Cynthia's Nightmare Fantasy Author: Golffdude
(Added on Mar 5, 2009) (This month 27611 readers) (Total 47323 readers)
A woman signes up on a website to be abducted and raped. Her fantasy is sold and fulfilled.

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: jreader (Edit) Rating: Mar 31, 2012
I found the premise very exciting, and think the writer was able to make a barely believable premise believable. I also liked that a group of men took a private fantasy, and were able to make it profitable for themselves while humiliating her. (8/10)
Replied by: Golffdude45-2 (Edit) (Apr 1, 2012)
Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I appreciate your interest and comments. Being a contractor I did things that are VERY do-able for anyone with a bit of experience in the trades. your suggestions are always appreciated....

Reviewer: sarahbunnyuk (Edit) Rating: Mar 12, 2009
I really enjoyed the start, with the description of the 'rape' website, and the concept was very good. I also enjoyed the description of the other women wanting their fantasies, both of which were quite close to my own personal one. Cynthias predicament though, I found rather too violent with the electric shock stuff, and also frightening. Humiliation is also one of my fantasies, though I have no desire to be vomiting as part of it!
I agree with the second reviewer, in that grammar and spelling could have been a little better, but that in itself didn't detract too much from my enjoyment of the story.
To sum up, a very good effort, but though her set up in a mens room was definitely humiliating, I thought it a little contrived and unlikely (you can see that I look for reality as well as a good erotic story!).At least it's encouraged me to read more of his work now! (7/10)

Reviewer: blossom (Edit) Rating: Mar 6, 2009
love the story, great idears hope to read more like it (9/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Mar 5, 2009
A good idea, which I thought I had read before sometime ago, until I realised it bore a resemblance to other Golffdude stories, hehe...
The only real letdown with this here tale is, again, the poor grammar and spelling. Too many errors for comfort, but still, the story was refreshing and enticing enough to warrant a nice eight.
JJ (8/10)

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