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Project Zone 3 Author: A.Broadsword
(Added on Feb 14, 2009) (This month 25370 readers) (Total 39438 readers)
Isolated in Africa, a Charity program is not all it seems then a Reporter investigates.

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Feb 22, 2009
Crap. That's what it is. A good idea, again written to pieces because of the lack of feeling and the far too many errors and missing words.
The story lacks on all fronts; it has no soul, neither do the people wandering around in it.
A. Broadsword would do us all, himself included, a favour by giving most of his tales a bit of depth.
It doesn't suffice to come up with an idea and then butcher that idea by letting his characters act like robots in an environment that is so ludicrous that it borders on being funny.
Sadly, it isn't even funny either.
Also, Africa and its charity programs used as a setting for what A. Broadsword wants to paint us, is unbelievable, as Africa is the most scrutinized country in the whole world.
Anyway, the story could have worked had A. Broadsword toned it down a bit, and had he added the much needed background detail.
Because, it's nice to use a charity program as a cover for some rather nasty shenanigans, I as a reader I would like to know how things came to be what they are.
JJ (2/10)

Reviewer: Eric Boss (Edit) Rating: Feb 15, 2009
Simply brilliant! Enjoyed it so much. (10/10)

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