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    Bethany
    
    Author: Kallie Thomas
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    (Added on Jan 28, 2002)
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    A young woman's car trouble turns to terror. | 
   
 
 
   
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    Lowest 
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    Zubisco
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    Sep 11, 2005 | 
   
   
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        Extremely nasty story, very well told; so much in so little words. Quite disturbing also. (10/10) 
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    headhunter
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    Feb 17, 2005 | 
   
   
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        Poor Bethany! Very concise, although a bit predictable. (9/10) 
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    mkemse
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    Feb 7, 2004 | 
   
   
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        good job (8/10) 
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    thundercat
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    Mar 19, 2003 | 
   
   
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        hard, but entertaining. (7/10) 
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    RubbrSpatula
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    Feb 23, 2002 | 
   
   
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        Kallie was the first author to introduce me the "fear of pregnancy" idea through her writing, and it's in a lot of her writing.  Sometimes I don't like it as much, but it was highly effective here...  (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Pillager
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    Jan 29, 2002 | 
   
   
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        Wow!  Excellent work, great feel for emotion, wonderful descriptions!  Terrific action without being dull witted, very hard core, just the way I like it!  Too bad about the other review--perhaps the reviewer should have should have taken note of the story codes first--you made no secret of this story's graphic nature. (10/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    VLMarquette
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    Jan 28, 2002 | 
   
   
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        It was a pretty okay short story.  A bit more graphic than is normally my taste, but what the hey.  It's all just fantasy (3/10) 
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        - Replied by: 
hyphen666
  (Edit)  (Jan 29, 2002)
 
        - "A pretty okay" means three? This is not a review, it is a hatchet job! Why is this story worse than average, which is what your rating says? What kind of feedback are you giving the author? What is your real agenda?
 
       
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