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Fantasy
Author: Jona
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(Added on Jan 18, 2009)
(This month 8868 readers) (Total 11970 readers) |
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A sub\'s fantasy of meeting her onlnie Master in a hotel room for the first time |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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Nice 'n' sweet. Tho most of your stories are very brief, Jona, I would consider leaving a space between paragraphs. It reads easier.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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intresting concept tho i have readstories similar on the site before, still good as eacg version is a bit different then the other (7/10)
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