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All bets off
Author: Aibo
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(Added on Nov 19, 2008)
(This month 27420 readers) (Total 48265 readers) |
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A man trains girls to become pets for rich customers. Eventually his consience catches up with him and makes him retire from his cruel trade. What shall he do with the last puppygirl he have had in training? This becomes a problem since the puppygirl refuses to be taken trough the final part of her training. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 2, 2011 |
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Clearly this is a well thought out story with very good use of the puppygirls emotions/feelings and attention to detail. Having said that however i find i must agree with redEva.
It is strange because there is quite a bit of action, the problem could be there is too much detail or the rather stilted use of English which suggests that English is not the authors first language. If the latter is the case why did Aibo not get someone to proof read the story first? (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Aibo
(Edit) (May 7, 2011)
- Hello, and thank you for the review.
Yes I write my stories in a language that is completely different than English. Years ago someone suggested I try to translate the better ones. Now English is my 5'th lang, this is the best I can manage. =)
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Dec 29, 2010 |
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rather dry read. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 21, 2008 |
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nice job (8/10)
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