| 
     
   
     | 
     | 
     | 
   
   
    | 
    The Shower
    
    Author: Diamondcat
     | 
   
   
    |   | 
    (Added on Oct 30, 2008)
            (This month 50109 readers) (Total 58712 readers) | 
   
   
    |   | 
    A lesson on consequences of not listening | 
   
 
 
   
    | Ratings and Reviews: | 
   
   
    | Number 
      of Ratings: 2 | 
    
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
  | 
 
| 1 | 
2 | 
3 | 
4 | 
5 | 
6 | 
7 | 
8 | 
9 | 
10 | 
 
| 0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
100% | 
0% | 
0% | 
0% | 
 
 
 | 
   
   
     Weighed
      Average (?):  (6.5/10) | 
   
   
    Average 
      Rating:  (7/10) | 
   
   
    Highest 
      Rating:  (7/10) | 
   
   
    Lowest 
      Rating:  (7/10) | 
   
 
 
 
   
     | 
     | 
     | 
     | 
   
   
    | Reviewer: 
    TheDoctorIsIn
  (Edit)     | 
    Rating:  | 
    Nov 3, 2008 | 
   
   
    |   | 
        I enjoyed this one!  Sometimes it's nice to read a story that isn't so over the top.  Besides there is something so sexy about a shower. (7/10) 
     | 
   
 
 
   
     | 
     | 
     | 
     | 
   
   
    | Reviewer: 
    skp2bear
  (Edit)     | 
    Rating:  | 
    Nov 1, 2008 | 
   
   
    |   | 
        Very poor editing and proofreading. For example, "Put your put" (7/10) 
     | 
   
 
 | 
     
       |