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Roger and Lori
Author: Terrible Tomas
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(Added on Oct 16, 2008)
(This month 7899 readers) (Total 12326 readers) |
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Roger is married. Lori is a friends daughter. She comes over, needing love. He eats her and then fucks her. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Oct 23, 2008 |
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Tomas, I read this story, then looked up and read a pair of your previous works. You really, really need to get an editor to help you get past things like grammar, spelling, and punctuation. The large number of errors contributes to the low scores of your other stories, and makes them very hard to enjoy. (2/10)
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