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Property of Mistress Savannah
Author: Garizon
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(Added on Sep 20, 2008)
(This month 86957 readers) (Total 111304 readers) |
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A man makes the biggest mistake of his life when he insults Mistress Savannah. He soon realises the consequences of his actions when she takes ownership of him. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
mastah007
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Oct 6, 2008 |
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Excellent beginning! I can only wonder what else she is going to do to him and whether she will release him after a week or decide to keep him indefinitely! Definitely looking forward to more chapters, this has a lot of potential. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
elliot_rr
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Sep 28, 2008 |
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Looks good so far....excellent in fact. Looking forward to the rest of his week in the suites. So many different rooms to be used...so many possiblilities. Hope to see mor of this story in the days to come. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
duchifat
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Sep 27, 2008 |
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good.waiting for more chpters (9/10)
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Reviewer:
jrscandles
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Sep 26, 2008 |
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Excellent start. Looking forward to future chapters. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
slave2isis
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Sep 25, 2008 |
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excellent story love the central charecter would like the story to evolve and give a glimse into her rich life style perhaps he becomes intoxicated by her glamour,this reader would love to read further perhaps been in keeping with excellent discriptions you might wish to mention jewels this always appeals to me (9/10)
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