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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
total.slave
(Edit) |
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Aug 20, 2012 |
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Great Story.... Is this story is based on reality or just friction? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jojobells
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May 21, 2011 |
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Excellent. It is by far the best story I've red here. Would have been nice to see more of Alex's fate... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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real good (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
joshjg
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Dec 31, 2008 |
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Excellent. Easily my fav story here. Would really really love to read more! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Aug 19, 2008 |
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Excellent!
Great detatched, documentary-like description, without becoming too distant and let the reader lose focus. On the contrary, the short, interlude-like paragraphs work great, both as a ways to paint a very well defined character and as a means to get the eroticometer blow its top.
I sincerely hope time goes by in the blink of an eye, for Alex, so we, the anxious readers, can get a glimpse of Alex's fate...
Thanks a lot for your delicious contribution, Lewis Chappelle... I'm off, finding an empty spot on my shelf...
JJ
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
LewisC
(Edit) (Aug 19, 2008)
- JimmyJump... Thanks for the very detailed and positive critique. I'm so glad you liked it. Lots of words, lots of work. Don't you think that leaving the story as it is, with the uncertainty or Alex's fate hanging expectantly in the air, might just be how this epistle should stand? Could it be that sometimes less is more? Just asking! Lewis
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Aug 19, 2008)
- As an avid reader (of about any subject), I'm afraid that sometimes (most of the time?) there's an amount of 'read-greed' involved.
When I see a great story, I would like to see more.
But I'm smart enough to realise (and have learned by experience) that indeed, more is not always better.
I am not someone to push a writer, certainly when a story is complete.
As always, it is up to the writer to decide when and where a tale finishes, and how and when an eventual addendum could/should be concocted.
As a compensation, I'll have a go at the other stories you have committed.
- Replied by:
LewisC
(Edit) (Aug 19, 2008)
- JimmyJump... That was a great response. I hope to keep you as a reader! Lewis
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| Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Aug 19, 2008 |
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Stimulates and excites the imagination. Interesting format. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
LewisC
(Edit) (Aug 19, 2008)
- bullfinch, Thanks for taking the time to review the story. I'm glad you liked it so well. Jen's a piece of work, isn't she? Biggreek
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Aug 17, 2008 |
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WOW! About as intense as can be written without permanant, crippling injury or snuff! If there is a percent or two of reality in this (as claimed)...there has to be a few more updates! BRAVO! At least someone has a very sick imagination to rival my own.
the Snark (10/10)
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- Replied by:
LewisC
(Edit) (Aug 17, 2008)
- Snark, Thanks for the review. And, it was fun to write... Lewis
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