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Ice and fire
Author: Penelope
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(Added on Aug 7, 2008)
(This month 16517 readers) (Total 25704 readers) |
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Written from the perspective of a young slave who fails to comply with her Masters orders and receives a very hot-cold punishment to learn her lesson |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
texancharm{E.C.Holland}
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Aug 13, 2008 |
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This was awesome! I am definately showing my Master this one *grin* thank you! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dr_BuzzCzar
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Aug 12, 2008 |
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All in all a good, enjoyable story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Aug 10, 2008 |
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On the story, the idea and first person narration are all great, the habit of capitalizing all references to your master and failing to capitalize those for yourself is probably a nod to the lifestyle but it gets annoying to see all those small i(s) and capitalized He’s. The habit of saying taught for thought is probably your spell checkers fault.
As for figging, the time honored use of peeled ginger root is quite stimulating, or so my lady claims. We’ve also found that Altoids® makes a “curiously strong” ginger mint that can achieve the same effect. You might ask your master (respectfully of course) to give it a whirl. Very convient when you are out in a restaurant or cinema and feel your sub isn’t squirming enough.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Qmoq
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Aug 10, 2008 |
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Consistent and atmospheric - very nice array of scenarios for the lucky gal in the story. A couple of spelling mistakes along the way, but nothing too bad. Good stuff. (8/10)
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