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Madame President
Author: Hemo101
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(Added on May 26, 2008)
(This month 53227 readers) (Total 67999 readers) |
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Two political rivals settle it the old fashioned way |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
gnuman
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May 30, 2008 |
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The grammatical and spelling errors did not bother me much. I liked the story and I felt the story was well thought out. I loved the last line, "went Barack." (7/10)
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- Replied by:
hemo101
(Edit) (May 30, 2008)
- Thank you for your kind words
Love Helen
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Reviewer:
schoolboylv
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May 29, 2008 |
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Too many sentence fragments, misspellings, and punctuation errors to enjoy. Get an editor and this story could score higher. But right now, it reads like a 3rd grader wrote it.... (3/10)
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- Replied by:
hemo101
(Edit) (May 29, 2008)
- Thank you for your comments.
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