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    My Master
    
    Author: JennyV
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    (Added on May 14, 2008)
            (This month 53772 readers) (Total 60418 readers) | 
   
   
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    Short and sweet =) | 
   
 
 
   
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    Average 
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    Highest 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Jorgy444
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    Aug 30, 2012 | 
   
   
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        Lacks essential details for reader to be able to really enjoy the story. Has great potential, writer needs to  write her story with readers point of view in mind, help reader to see the story with their eyes. (6/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    JimmyJump
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    Jan 30, 2009 | 
   
   
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        Second effort from JennyV posted here, and way, way better than the first. A bit short to my taste, but that takes nothing away from the tale. Like the synopsys says: short 'n' sweet. Indeed. JJ (9/10) 
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