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Evolution Author: JasonT
(Added on Apr 21, 2008) (This month 47973 readers) (Total 55056 readers)
This is basically a love story that describes the author’s actual introduction to sensual bondage by his first girlfriend. There is no direct sexual contact in this story.

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Weighed Average (?): (4.5/10)
Average Rating: (4.5/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (2/10)

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Reviewer: Dryhill (Edit) Rating: Apr 28, 2010
Sorry although i like the story lack of paragraphs and the small print (i am 60 and even with glasses prefer a font size of 10, or better still 12, for longer stories) means i cannot give a rating higher than 5.
Please do not be totally discouraged, do keep on writing. (5/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jul 13, 2008
very hard t read and follow (3/10)

Reviewer: chuck (Edit) Rating: Apr 24, 2008
I enjoy stories about the introduction to BDSM. As in the introduction, the story was as much about the introduction to bondage than the actual play. The the writing flowed naturally and the story was consistent. Those expecting hard core BDSM will be disappointed, but the story was well worth the telling.
The lack of paragraphs was a definite drawback or I would have rated a bit higher. I had to highlight text in the middle just to keep my place. (7/10)

Reviewer: Lisa Jones (Edit) Rating: Apr 22, 2008
Jason
I struggled to give you any stars at all because the story is nearly impossible to read. Use paragraphs! Once again, use paragraphs.
When faced with huge blocks of unbroken text the reader struggles and, in my case, gives up. I'm sure that what's there, if properly presented, is fine but I, and many other readers, won't be able to find it. (2/10)

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