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Bedside Manner
Author: Dorothy Strangelove
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(Added on Apr 12, 2008)
(This month 49573 readers) (Total 55570 readers) |
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A nurse who specialises in therapy for intimate problems treats a handsome Bad Boy to some very special attention. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 17, 2009 |
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A story for which there are no accurate codes, really.
Very well written, although it feels more like a musing, a passing thought, than a story.
Goings-on have a certain vagueness also, as it's not clear who is leading who here.
It's more like a symbiosys, a melting together of two wants and two needs, a spiral of the nurse manipulating the patient into manipulating her manipulating him, and so on.
And then, of course, there's the ending. Which shows that the only one been led-on was, once more, the reader.
It shows again that Dorothy Strangelove stories don't fit in any square, except that of a specially made Strangelove space inside your mind. I just hope I won't run short on space as Dorothy's repertoire grows.
Vey well done, Miss Strangelove.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
dorothystrangelove
(Edit) (Feb 17, 2009)
- I wrote this piece because I wanted to create a short story which would go inside the mind of a female role-player in a role play situation that was pretty mild and nicely erotic, to illustrate how a game can be played from the perspective of the players - we only descover the truth at the end, it's a game, and yes, it was a passing thought, I decide to write a tiny slice and see how it turned out and I was pleased enough with it to call it finished, it is small but it depicted the role play scenario as real up to a point and I was pleased with the way it turned out, it's about how role play can be 'real' for the moment, and about how fantasy can play a big part and what both parties get out of it.
Once again, thanks for the appreciation.
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