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NV2
Author: Atomage
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(Added on Feb 27, 2008)
(This month 53183 readers) (Total 66881 readers) |
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Continuing in New Victoria, these are the first hours of an immigrant woman from the United States in this traditional male dominated state. Further episodes, some brutally hard, others less so will follow. It is your decision which reaches the page first. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Aug 19, 2011 |
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good reading, good narrative. but a 22 inch rod? that's not physically possible without the removal of some significant and necessary organs!! (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Far better than its predecessor, because more lavishly written and more balanced as well, with more attention paid to the characters' behaviour.
Nice follow-up.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 21, 2010 |
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Good story a few spelling errors but not too many to distract. But like masterdw did you really mean 22 inches or should that be centimetres? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Egghead
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Apr 13, 2008 |
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I really like the basic idea behind the story: the community devoted to male dominance. It opens an entirely new world to fatasize about and the author has been innovative in that respect already. I am looking forward to the next installments. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Mar 2, 2008 |
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I will rerate when more is written . Very good start. Meanwhile help me out. The cuntbar is twenty two inches long? that is not torture, that will kill. Was there a typo or am I missing something. Thanks (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
frechdax
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Mar 2, 2008 |
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Great story which fuels my fantasies!
Hope the writer will continue it soon ... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
gnuman
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Feb 29, 2008 |
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If the writer continues in a similar fashion, then I will give a higher rating. At this point more story is needed. I need to get to the master to get a better feeling. I hope more is written. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
fitzgilbert
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Feb 29, 2008 |
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i whish Atomage writes more his world offers great possibilities.thanks for the pleasure i found (8/10)
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