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Therapy for Tammi Jo
Author: Arin Altra
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(Added on Feb 20, 2008)
(This month 14100 readers) (Total 34828 readers) |
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A scheming golddigger gets way more than she bargains for when she tries to manipulate her husband through marriage counseling. She will find out that her therapist\'s book \"The Power of Discipline\" isn\'t the self-help manual she thinks it is. (first person, wife\'s POV) |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
delish
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Jun 5, 2011 |
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This one is just okay, for me. I didn't identify at all with Tamara, first of all, and it was told from her POV. This left me disengaged from the experience of the story. Also lacking was any real indication about why she had such a drastic change of heart. I mean, it's alluded that all she needed was a firm hand, but it was such a sudden 180 that it seemed insincere. Again, this interrupted the flow of immersion for me. There's potential here, but it looks like the author decided to take a permanent break from composing it- it's been over 3 years now. It could just be me, though- I've been a little lukewarm on a lot of stories I used to find satisfying. Give it a read and judge for yourself. :) (5/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Pretty good story, with some neat dialogue.
The Cayman account thing shows this story was either written a while back, or the author doesn't follow banking regulations, as the Cayman Island banks have recently (as of 2004, me thinks) started co-operating with American and other governments to fight fraude... Minor details, I know, but I'm a sucker for those.
Only thing which annoyed me was the slightly rushed feeling at times, and the "to be continued" at the bottom, the latter having to happen as of yet. Okay, that's two things.
JJ (9/10)
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Doc_Odd
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May 11, 2008 |
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Didn't find Tammi Jo very believable or interesting. (6/10)
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zakaluka
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Feb 25, 2008 |
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Fantastic progression, good development. Eagerly awaiting more instalments. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 22, 2008 |
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this is what this site is all about as far as stories go!!! (10/10)
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masterdw
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Feb 22, 2008 |
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Good motivation, good action. I am looking forward to more. Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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