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The Future
Author: C.
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(Added on Jan 29, 2008)
(This month 246170 readers) (Total 293828 readers) |
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This story is in two parts. Part I takes place 200 years in the future where the world is controlled entirely by women and males are being slain for food. In addition, many male bodies are stuffed and put on display as well being used to make numerous items. Part II explains how this future world comes into existence. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Jun 25, 2008 |
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Thank you C for a fantastic fantasy! As a male I generally seek out maledom erotica but this femdom story was so exquisitely crafted it held my interest all the way through 23 chapters! The central character as detective carried Part I off very well, and the change in p.o.v. for Part II also worked very well!
Chapter 24 just read. Exquisite descriptions of a woman's feelings as she humiliates a male! The rating is same as for first 23 chapters.
Chapters 25 and 26 just read. The quality of this fantasy just keeps going and going. Hope there will be many more chapters!
Chapters 27 and 28 just read. Erotic content much less than previous story. Hope this will change again in future chapters. Also how can Tom's genitals be mounted on the wall but also in the cooler given to Lisa? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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May 18, 2008 |
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What a fantastic story! The detailing of the events is startling, and the whole concept is mind blowing. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Warrior
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Mar 15, 2008 |
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Fantastic! This is the sort of science fiction erotica I love. There isn't much sci-fi erotica to begin with, even less sci-fi femdom erotica, and as for sci-fi femdom erotica that is also meant to be enjoyed by females (I am a woman): there is only a very small amount.
I do have some small criticisms, like I think that the reader should be given just a little bit more information than the main character about the society, and there were a few small typos - not enough to have a negative impact on the flow of reading though.
I look forward to reading more about John's explorations and the history that resulted in the current society. I am particularly looking forward to reading about how they reproduce.
Thankyou for adding to this niche area. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
nickd1104
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Feb 8, 2008 |
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Thank you C for an interesting story - I am looking forward to the continuation of this and am eager to read the next chapters.
I do have one criticism of your writing and that is there seems to be a lot of repetition in many areas. The story would not lose any of its "punch" if you were to accept that the reader has already become well acquainted with the various body parts on display all over the city.
Other than that its a great theme and, as a submissive masochist who has been controlled by my dominant wife for over 30 years (yes that's true) I find the idea of extreme cruelty performed by women on men to be fascinating and (almost) desirable.
Please continue the story soon - I'm looking forward to reading the final chapters.
Nickd (9/10)
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MissMoth
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Feb 7, 2008 |
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The descriptions of the particular fetish are perfect, but the story does not progress very quickly. It also suffers from an extremely detached hero, as I feel like I've been taken on a tour of demented porn land more than that I'm taking part in a story.
As porn, it's grade A. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Warrior
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2008)
- I don't think that having a detached hero causes it to suffer - I think that is beneficial for the story and aids the reader in contemplation. It does detract from making the story more erotic, but I don't mind that.
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