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Author: DoctorE
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(Added on Nov 27, 2007)
(This month 80096 readers) (Total 116087 readers) |
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Teen, kidnapped and raped. Ok so everyone bashed my other story "Teen gets summer job" for its grammer, it was actually a rough draft I submitted. I hope my new fans will enjoy this one better and if your offended by this , then don't read it. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 12, 2010 |
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Good story, awkwardly written. DoctorE clearly belongs to the category of 'amateurs' (meaning, non-experienced writers having a go at proze) and it shows.
I must add that the latest chapters are of a 'better' quality. Maybe the good doctor has been sharpening his/her pencils on other stuff, but whatever the case, there's clearly some progress here.
Too bad there's too much time between additions.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Nov 9, 2008 |
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Very nice story, but there are still too many spelling mistakes to give it a higher score. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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i lke you synposis, but the only wat a person knows if they like the story or not is to read it, if they do not care for it, no need to leave a review, but one has to read any story to determinei f they like it or not
I haveseen to many stories on this and other sites where thew synopsis simpyl is outo f line with the story, (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
takarada
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Dec 1, 2007 |
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Good stuff, hope there is a part 2 (8/10)
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