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Schoolgirl Cum Girl
Author: Cum Girl
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(Added on Nov 14, 2007)
(This month 16490 readers) (Total 34985 readers) |
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For two days I became a character of invention; Schoolgirl Cum Girl. I became totally absorbed in being a 16 year old schoolgirl. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 27, 2007 |
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Delightful, full of love and wishes, hopes and reality. Your words (and Master's accusations...) ring true with my own subbie's statements. I'd still like you to reread your story, out loud, which would make obvious grammatical errors like "MSN Master" clear; if you are reading it, or speaking it, it needs a comma between them. I was wondering, for just a minute, what exactly a 'MSN Master" was.
Again, this is a pleasing story to read... and I look forward to more of your work. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Cum Girl
(Edit) (Dec 3, 2007)
- Thank you chksng19
What can I say; I don't know what an "MSN Master" is either. I do try very hard to get my grammar correct. I read and edit extensively before I publish, but I guess that my grammar isn't the strongest. Please believe me when I say that I do try my hardest to get it right. However, I am delighted that my failings didn't prevent you from enjoying the story entirely and I am flattered by your rating.
Cum Girl
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Nov 20, 2007 |
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Perfect! Due to some circumstances I've overlooked Cum Girl's entries, and I must say they are astoundingly good.
This one's extremely well written. Soliloquy-wise, they don't come any better than this, with just the right amount of half-spoken, half-thought musings and a right mix of semi-reality and half-dreamings...
Like I said: perfect.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Cum Girl
(Edit) (Nov 23, 2007)
- I don't really know what to say but thank you very much JimmyJump. A 10 score from a regular reviewer such as yourself who focuses both on the content and literary merit is praise indeed. I hope I don't disappoint with Parts 2 and 3.
Cum Girl
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