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10 Day Submissive
Author: xSyrenx
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(Added on Nov 3, 2007)
(This month 75565 readers) (Total 108577 readers) |
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Piercing, fetish story based over a time period of ten days, diary format. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Most excellent proposition, both in the main character's written-down musings as in the set-up, or format, of the story. Am off. Gotta go searching for my buttons again. And repair the roof once more. JJ (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Polecat
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Nov 26, 2007 |
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Very good writing, and the presentation is very original. Very enjoyable. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
SimonMagick
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Nov 21, 2007 |
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This is such a good fantasy, and your girl is unique in both her erotic and romantic bent towards submission. It's a shame about the typos. I also write so I know how difficult it can be to catch one's own mistakes. If you would like me to edit for you (typos only) I would be happy too. I am anxious to read the rest of her days... (8/10)
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