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Burning
Author: Whipsaw
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(Added on Oct 17, 2007)
(This month 53589 readers) (Total 70648 readers) |
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A falsely convicted man launches a vendetta against his accuser. He finds that revenge is sweet, but costly. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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Razor7826 is a very generous man, I must say.
JJ (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Razor7826
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Oct 20, 2007 |
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A decent story, but you need to work on your chapter breaks and scene construction. Once the action starts, the chapters seem to randomly be divided, and the starts and stops of each chapter do not feel like endings or beginnings.
Also, M/m and modification need to be listed as story codes. Both are rather jarring to unexpectedly come across in the story. (5/10)
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