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The Fulkner Research
Author: Andy Drove
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(Added on Sep 13, 2007)
(This month 17106 readers) (Total 32129 readers) |
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A master sends his girlfriend now a slave to a quasi-medical center for treatment, after he burned off her clit and she can no longer orgasm. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Sep 21, 2007 |
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This was a difficult story to grade. Your theme was good, but you have errors throughout the story. The main problem was trying to following the conversations. (5/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 21, 2007 |
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Some concern about who is talking at times. Sentences jumble together because of it, and it is more difficult to follow.
Looking forward to more, please. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
orangeblossoms
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Sep 20, 2007 |
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All my favorite story codes! If this was your first story, great job, I wonder if your going to have more submissives visiting that evil medical center! :) (7/10)
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