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    (Added on Aug 19, 2007)
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    The perils of time travel | 
   
 
 
   
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    Average 
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    | Reviewer: 
    stormbringer
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    Aug 25, 2007 | 
   
   
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        it has a lot of promise, good job. (8/10) 
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    Aug 23, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Lots and lots of spelling errors, etc, make it a little rough, but the story was quick, easy, and fun. Nice job! (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
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    Aug 21, 2007 | 
   
   
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        I didn't notice any glaring typos though I also wasn't looking for them.  Original story, well written, could go a LOT further and I hope it does. (10/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
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    Aug 19, 2007 | 
   
   
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        You have a boatload full of typos!!!  This was an amusing story and cleaned up, it would have earned a 9 from me. (7/10) 
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