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The Bracelet setup
Author: Helen
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(Added on Aug 8, 2007)
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A forgetful young slave is trapped, and punished by a spiteful minx. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
barbod
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Aug 14, 2007 |
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I have read this story before, it was already put on this site on 24/01/2007 by Helen D' Rago called 'the Bracelet'. I don't know if these story writer is the same person but the 2 stories are identical word for word.
EDIT COMMENT
Having just noticed that the e-mail addresses are virtually identical, I am revising my score as it seems like a resubmission of an original story by the same author. It was worth reading again. Sorry for the original comments. (7/10)
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budgie
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Aug 9, 2007 |
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I, too, read this story earlier in the year and I have to say it is the best femdom story I have read on here for a long time. I was hoping there might have been a sequel, or at least more work by Ms D'Rago.
I have rated it 10, but there are obvious concerns at to whether this story has been "stolen" from Ms D'Rago or whether the original author has just reposted her story again using a similar user name, for some reason.
Hopefully an explanation will be forthcoming and we can look forward to more of the same from the original author, or maybe a continuation of this story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
enslaved25
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Aug 8, 2007 |
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Superb femdom. Brilliantly erotic, bravo, more. (10/10)
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Tcheena3
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Aug 8, 2007 |
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Oooohh! Vicious. And delicious! Looking forward to the next chapter. A minor point on formatting... indenting the first line of each paragraph doesn't seem to work so well when there are only 2 lines in a paragraph. It makes it a bit difficult to read. (8/10)
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