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Fitness Freak Ordeal
Author: Harry Berg
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(Added on Jul 31, 2007)
(This month 114859 readers) (Total 170120 readers) |
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Marlene �Marnie� Wagner wakes to find herself being raped by four strange men who�ve kidnapped her. Her initial assumption that it was random proves wrong when the mysterious Sergei arrives to torture her into revealing the location of a missing twenty million dollars. The recent death of her husband in a boating accident may be faked. Sergei offers her a deal. Find the money or be killed along with her family. Marnie begins an odyssey to discover what really happened. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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not bad at all, real good start it reads like a novel even if no where near as long (9/10)
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TomOfSweden
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Nov 29, 2007 |
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The sex scenes are extremely well written. I like how she's thinking of other stuff while being raped. What I didn't like was the other stuff. You don't explore her emotions that much which is okay if she's supposed to be a superhuman fuck slut, which is fine in stories. But if you're not going for believable, why put so much effort in making the story believable. I thought it was a bit wasted effort and detracted from the story. Anyway, I gave it a good score since it gave me a hard on, which is what counts. I think the first two where the best ones. After that it's a bit too little rape and too much "boring stuff".
It may sound like I'm being mean and don't like it. I'm not. I think it was great. (9/10)
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Venom
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Oct 3, 2007 |
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Wonderfully weird;
better and better with every part - at least till now ;)
After this fifth part I guess: the husband is stil alive and happy with his twenty millions and his secret girlfriend while his "widow" gets her arse toasted. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 8, 2007 |
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An interesting place for a chapter break. Hmm...
Not a bad telling of the tale; I hope things pick up somewhat in the next segment. AND they did. Well done! (9/10)
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