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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 29, 2007 |
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A fine tale, and well-told. A return visit might be fun, perhaps where more humiliation would be possible? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 28, 2007 |
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You write very well (and very fast). I'm not a watersports/scatology fan, but grimaced and sped past those parts. I hope you keep posting. Addressing DeGrinch's comment, the sentence structure was conversational, and much like the way some of my friends speak. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rhabbi
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Jul 28, 2007 |
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This story was ver good, and i enjoyed it immensly. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Jul 27, 2007 |
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Not bad. You could have set up the characters a bit more, and some of the sentence structure wasn't very good; it was still easy to read. The story its self was good but I think you should have stressed the birthday present aspect a bit more at the beginning. (7/10)
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