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Butterfly Wings
Author: Tcheena3
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(Added on Jul 19, 2007)
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Erika and her husband are humiliated and blackmailed into becoming subjects of illegal human clinical trials and assorted abuses by a pharmaceutical company intent on revolutionising their market niche. |
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| Reviewer:
Readerman
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Oct 29, 2010 |
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Very nicely written and draws the reader in. Glad it was updated and can’t wait to see the more of this story. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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I wouldn't go so far as Ishmael and say this is unique, but that it is very refreshing indeed stands out like a lighthouse on a distant shore.
Exquisite description of some vivid imaginings written in a clear, understandable and exiting fashion.
First parts were posted almos 18 months ago now, but I sincerely hope that further chapters will be added still, because it would be a real shame to let such an extraordinary essay go to waste.
Splendid start, just splendid.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Tcheena3
(Edit) (Feb 23, 2009)
- Many thanks for your kind words, JimmyJump. Your review has prompted me to get off my (sore) backside and post another instalment. Hope you enjoy it!
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| Reviewer:
jptona
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Jul 25, 2007 |
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Well written - Very descriptive - Provides excellent dialogue and thoughts of individuals (10/10)
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Ishmael
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Jul 25, 2007 |
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This story starts off in a unique and refreshing way with a writing style that is amazingly descriptive and well thought out. I believe this author just oozes with natural writing talent that apparently has been untapped... that is until now. The author leads us down a literary path without the reader ever once looking back and before you know it, you've become lost in the evolving story and at the end, wishing there was more. I look forward to all future installments. Great start! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 20, 2007 |
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I probably should've waited for the second installment, but this is the most promising start to a story that I've read in months. Delightfully evil! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Tcheena3
(Edit) (Jul 20, 2007)
- Thanks everyone for the encouraging reviews so far. This is the first story of any kind that I've ever written and I'm discovering that it's alot harder and takes ALOT longer than I had expected. So, I have the next few chapters mapped out in my mind and I'll do the best I can not to take too long over it!
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leotayn
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Jul 20, 2007 |
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can't wait for the second installment (9/10)
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kamf1978
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Jul 19, 2007 |
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A good start to what is hopefully a long story. The main character is a somewhat believeable person, and the story so far drew me in. (8/10)
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