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Political Fortune
Author: shorterbus
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(Added on Jul 5, 2007)
(This month 22211 readers) (Total 34403 readers) |
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A beautiful young woman learns the downside to political action. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
notdanaher
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Nov 17, 2011 |
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This is a beuatiful story well brought out by building the characters.
The part 2 & 3 of the story really turns you on.
My only regret is that there are no parts 4,5,6....
Maybe the author will try to post it again or provide a link to this stories. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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This the ultimate short in its genre. Nothing more, nothing less.
It's funny, dead serious, threatening, erotic and so very plausible.
Top rate material.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 7, 2007 |
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Good start with lots of potential. The way it began, it seemed to be almost a 'cookie-cutter' story; more of the same old thing. Then came the twist of the 'talent' in a packing crate... and things progressed from there. Anxious for the next piece! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
shorterbus
(Edit) (Jul 19, 2007)
- Sorry guys, I submitted more chapters for this but they were not posted.
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| Reviewer:
TOXIS
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Jul 6, 2007 |
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The beginnings of another great story. Maybe the best erotic illustrator and a very good writer. Lots of stage setting. Much like Cutty by Bokkey, the beginning is steady and suggests nastiness to come. Good to see you writing again. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
shorterbus
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2007)
- Thanks, Toxis, very nice of you to say. Actually, I consider myself more of a writer than illustrator, its just that in this format most readers prefer an instant pay-off rather than the slow pace at which my stories move.
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