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The Big Cat Club
Author: splatter_GB
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(Added on Nov 2, 2001)
(This month 54099 readers) (Total 76744 readers) |
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The journey into life long submission, started on a whim, with a very painful training process. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
le forgeron
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Jan 24, 2003 |
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It's missing the details of the feelings/sensations.
The actions are just barely suggested where more time could be taken to described them more slowly and with more drama.
The main story is fine, even if lacking minor diversion, but only one end is enough. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
slavejc
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Nov 13, 2001 |
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very tastfully written. (10/10)
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