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Saturday stay
Author: Sleepman Mike
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(Added on May 11, 2007)
(This month 53024 readers) (Total 67012 readers) |
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A naughty boss is put through the paces at a femdom clinic |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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May 14, 2007 |
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A pretty good story. I have to disagree with azrig about the guy escaping. By the time he gets the opportunity he's drunk, and has been put through the wringer. He's probably near exhaustion, though the author doesn't make that point. Also, even if he does beat them up (and what happened to the other two, by the way?) he can't get out of the locked bulding. My biggest complaint is about some inaccurate terminology. The author writes of the guy getting water dripped into his balls by I.V., but I think he's really getting it added to his scrotum (ball sac). This story is NOT a waste of time, and I hope the author tries again soon. (7/10)
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azrlg17
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May 12, 2007 |
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Some of the sex is pretty good.
The situation is pretty unbelievable.
And one part is just wrong IMHO. They let him up in the middle of the torture and tell him they have his clothes and the clinic is closed so he can't run away. OK with you so far so what would a normal guy do? Right he would attack them and try to beat them up. He was not too drunk or drugged it was one against 2 but if he surprises them after the 1st punch it's one against one. But he just shrugs and accepts it? It would have been much better if he had attacked and got his ass whupped.
Grammar is OK, spelling is mediocre. Use a spell checker the next time. (6/10)
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