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Flaying Flame
Author: The Chairman
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(Added on May 7, 2007)
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Flame and her Master visit Sadique, where anything can happen, and will. Contains some disturbing ideas, and not for the easily squicked. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
kicksnf
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Jun 15, 2011 |
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SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !!! SICK & PLAIN DISGUSTING !! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
street0
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Aug 14, 2007 |
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Deliciously cruel. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
sirbor
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May 17, 2007 |
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A very good tale. I also believe that it may have moved a bit fast. You describe a truly diabolic world. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (May 17, 2007)
- I thank you, both for your appreciation, and for your criticism. I will attempt to preserve the things you and others liked about the story, whilst growing in the areas where you provided reasonable criticism.
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| Reviewer:
PascalP
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May 13, 2007 |
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Always good in non describing the worst, Chairman.
Only one regret: the story goes a little fast after the abduction of flame.
But yes: very recommendable! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (May 13, 2007)
- Thank you for your kind words. Your phrase sums up my attitude quite well, and your criticism is appreciated. Thank you!
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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May 10, 2007 |
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I feel faint after reading that! I was warned, so I can't complain! {{{shuddering}]} You write very well, but ... I won't be reading any more of it! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
TheChairman
(Edit) (May 10, 2007)
- Thanks for taking the time to review my story. I really appreciate it. I'd apologise for it upsetting you, save that that was one of goals.
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