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Tali's Terror Author: justin benedict
(Added on Apr 9, 2007) (This month 14207 readers) (Total 29925 readers)
Tali has a bad enough time with her Master, Fenton the Felon, but then she has to deal with her Master's daughter--and some monkeys!

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Apr 3, 2008
very well done and enjoyable (9/10)

Reviewer: Mad Lews (Edit) Rating: Apr 19, 2007
A couple minor grammar and spelling glitches, (But don't we all get those)Overall a story that bounces from scene to scene without a lot of plot development. Don't get me wrong, the scenes are hot and described in loving detail. Still, an overall thrust to the story, and a feeling that its headed somewhere, would make it complete. (7/10)

Reviewer: Elkor (Edit) Rating: Apr 15, 2007
The grammar was good but the sudden addition/transition of characters detracted from it. As a "quick stand-alone" it seems like you tried to pack too many plot elements into it. (6/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Apr 11, 2007
Those were some mean folks!!!! A few typos, but for the most part, good job! (8/10)
Replied by: justincbenedict (Edit) (Apr 11, 2007)
I must tell you, I was listening to "Hey Carrie Anne" by the Byrds, and I recall you writing to some doofus online who called you a dude saying "My name is carrie Anne, thus I am not a dude"
thanks for the feedback, Carrie!

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Apr 10, 2007
Another evil and rough tale in the series. Hope there's more! (8/10)

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