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In The Parking Garage
Author: dr_mabeuse
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(Added on Apr 6, 2007)
(This month 51952 readers) (Total 63385 readers) |
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Non-consent with a mysterious stranger in an underground parking garage |
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JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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This story has a great build-up. It has the reader sitting at the edge of the seat awaiting in eager anticipation while the tension rises.
It reminds me of the prelude to the shower scene in Hitchcock's "Psycho", or the purposeful Lee Marvin striding through the harshly lit corridor in John Boorman's "Point Blank"...
This is erotic thriller-writing at its best.
JJ (10/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 27, 2007 |
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all your stories i have read are great (10/10)
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J's blu
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Apr 30, 2007 |
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what can i say? a brilliant short story. descriptive scene setting, character sketching, words used with a true craftsmans skill, to draw the reader in. (10/10)
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jchorner9
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Apr 18, 2007 |
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This is a well written enjoyable story. There is a line-- "what kind of man do you think I am" that had me LOL, and I expect the author did too when he wrote it. Perhaps that line could have worked as the last line of what I think is a complete short story.
There is real character development here and vivid detailed decriptions from the vastness of the garage to the humid feel of her breast when pulled from her bra. This guy can write! (10/10)
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Mad Lews
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Apr 9, 2007 |
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A tale of erotic terror, fear, and a growing need those feelings spawn. It’s all deftly sketched with an economy of words. Yet the story manages to be rich in both emotional depth and physical description. Yet another work from a Master Bard to long away from these humble halls. (10/10)
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