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An unfortunate date
Author: Meg
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(Added on Apr 4, 2007)
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A young woman goes on a date with an entrancing and mysterious man, but realises that his secret his a much more dangerous mystery than she bargained for. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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A couple of silly spelling mistakes, and some gut-wrenching ones too. A pity the abductor is way too eager to get his rocks off by getting himself treated to a blowjob. Wasn't the thing to do at that moment in time. Like MadLews, I also found the switching in POV a bit disconcerting.
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Very well written. Very nice pinpointing of the thoughts and irritations of the woman, great descriptions of what's going on.
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Extremely enjoyable. Here's to hoping for additional content ('kling')
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
blossom
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Apr 10, 2007 |
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it seem so life like i kept getting drawn into it never wanting it to end. i love the to he see`s and she see`s i can get a deeper/ better understanding of what both people are feeling. (10/10)
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Mad Lews
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Apr 5, 2007 |
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Nice story very impressive descriptions. I think the occasional change in point of view is awkward and doesn't contribute that much but it's just my opinion. (8/10)
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dennisthmn
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Apr 5, 2007 |
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A very good start to a execelent story cant wait for the next chapter (10/10)
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